Feedback and Changes.

This project as are the others are weekly reviewed by our tutors. So far the main concept of my project has been received pretty well, as were the uses of symbolism. However the main criticisms centralise on the depiction on the Collective possessed character designs. It has been pointed out that they are too zombie like and therefore distracting from the point they there to make. So it's been suggested I tone it down and make their 'Possession' more subtle.

It has also been expressed that some feel the storyline is too convoluted for a film of it's length introducing too many characters with histories that are referanced. The orginal point was to introduce different groups of characters that the main character was then to "Fix" by possessing them and make them behave in an more ideal but disturbing way, disturbing because the behavor is forced and not natural. So along with the toning down I have to simplify the storyline, perhaps by introducing just one group of people being possessed and focous on how they alone are effected, with more subtle referances to the fact they arn't the only ones possessed.